Yet again...though I feel I can get away with just poetry in my posts cause I'm gonna write more later, seeing as I have posted how often in just one day? Besides, these poems are conveying emotions from the past and here now in my future so I share them instead of this drivel
Worse
Written March 16, 2004
A hollow existence
Nightmarish realities at each turn
I've pulled the mask back on
Slipped back into my hole
Nothing is what it seems
Deny the truth and buy the lie
I've become what I was
And yet somehow worse
I've banished myself into the darkness of
Loss and lonliness
Into the despair of regret and self pity
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I like the ending of this poem, it's kind of abrupt (in a good way) finality. And the word "banish" is one of my all time favorite words...
If I don't comment on a poem, it's not because I didn't read it or don't like it or anything like that. Sometimes I just feel like it should be commented on. Analyzed or nit picked or pulled apart and seperating the golden pieces from the copper... and usually I don't know what to say. But I know you like feedback so I will do my best.
...It's really cool to talk to you again, by the way...
Thank you for your effort, I really and truly appreciate it, and love talking to you again as well, glad we didn't quite go through with that whole thing...you know what I mean
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